Use quotes after the claim, not instead of it

A quote can make evidence feel stronger because it comes from outside your own voice. That does not mean the quote explains itself.

A quote can make evidence feel stronger because it comes from outside your own voice.

That does not mean the quote explains itself.

A sentence from a recommendation letter, a media article, an event page, or an award description still needs a job in the petition.

The weak version is:

"Here is an impressive quote."

The stronger version is:

"This quote supports this claim because..."

That before-sentence matters.

It tells the reader what to notice.

If a recommender describes your role, the petition still has to say which role, which facts the writer can verify, and which criterion the letter supports.

If a media article describes your work, the petition still has to say why the publication and article matter for the published-material criterion or the final merits argument.

If a source describes an award, the petition still has to explain issuer, date, selection, field connection, and exhibit.

The quote is evidence.

The claim is the sentence that makes the evidence usable.

Before pasting a quote into a petition, write three labels in the margin:

  • Claim: what sentence is this quote helping prove?
  • Source: who is speaking, publishing, or describing the fact?
  • Reason: why is this source positioned to verify it?

If those three lines are clear, the quote has a job.

If one of them is vague, the quote may be decoration.

And decoration is not what the petition needs.

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